Subject: Some review comments
From: Jayaram Bhasker (jbhasker@Cadence.COM)
Date: Thu Feb 28 2002 - 12:07:27 PST
Here are some bugs I found in draft 2.0:
1. 5.3, should be "...This is to prevent ...".
2. 5.4, should be "... test2 ... when ena is not 1."
3. Corrected the ' in Ex 20.
4. 5.6.2, second para, should be "... an implicit ...".
5. 6.1, in the list of attributes, some = symbols were bold - debolded them.
6. Para prior to 7.2 is not correct anymore. Changed
to "The set of predefined attributes that shall be supported are described in 6.1.".
7. Also added some more meat to the Introduction section.
These will be corrected in the next draft.
- bhasker
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