RE: [sv-ec] email ballot: response due by 11:59pm Thursday June 11 2009

From: Bresticker, Shalom <shalom.bresticker_at_.....>
Date: Mon Jun 08 2009 - 23:30:17 PDT
On Mantis 1517,

The first change modifies 18.5.7 by adding a subclause header 18.5.7.1. OK.

The next change is confusing.
The header says, "Add the section in 18.5.7.2 Array reduction constraints".
I guess the intent was to add the following as 18.5.7.2, but that is not exactly what it says.
The following text then is numbered 18.5.7.1, not 18.5.7.2, and has a different subclause title, "Array reduction iterative constraints,"
with the additional word, "iterative". This is confusing for an editor. Please change the instruction to "Add the following as 18.5.7.2," and fix the numbering in the text.
Also, the "interpretation" of c2 is correct only in the context of constraint c1, but I suppose that is obvious.
"item" should not be in bold.

Thanks,
Shalom

Mantis 1517    id 189

http://www.eda.org/svdb/view.php?id=1517

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