Subject: [sv-ec] Section 4.2 (from CH30) needs rewording
From: Stefen Boyd (stefen@boyd.com)
Date: Tue Mar 04 2003 - 17:51:04 PST
Some comments while wearing my "editor" hat:
Section 4.2 has two new paragraphs in the middle,
starting with "Unpacked arrays can be made
The first paragraph of these two doesn't belong
here. Events already can be used in unpacked arrays
(see A.2.3 list_of_event_identifiers). Mentioning
that classes can be arrayed should be in the
section describing classes (Section 11). Listing
new types that can be in an array is good for a
summary document but doesn't belong here.
The second paragraph is a weird way to introduce
a new feature! This should be in it's own little
section. I would make 4.3 "Declaring Arrays", move
the current contents of 4.3 to 4.3.1 and create a
section 4.3.2 "Declaration Shorthand" A new feature
addition doesn't belong an a note buried in the
section.
Stefen
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